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PostSubject: Thunder- male   Mon Dec 24, 2012 8:22 pm

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Date Joined: 12-1-12
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Name: Thunder
Age: 2 years
Gender: Male
Species: Timber wolf
Strengths: Headstrong, big, heavy, loyal, confident
Weaknesses: Afraid of fire, emotional, friendly, believes in what he's told, quiet, protective
Pack: Roztok
Rank: Pack Member

Appearance:Thunder fur is midnight black. His eyes are yellow. He is a bit bigger than most wolves. His fur is not as thick as it supposed to be.
Thunder can be loyal and protective. He believes anything he's told because of his loyalty. He is in search of a pack to protect. He can be bit of a handful if you anger him. He is a great friend and will do anything to make them feel better. He is emotional and can get upset easily. He also doesn't talk much. When he feels the urge to do something he will do it and nothing will stop him. He gets angry when friends/family put their life in danger. He does do wild things at certain times of day, and doesn't play around. He
When he cares about someone he will do anything to protect them. He is mostly in a good mood and is willing to help any of his friends. He obeys any higher ranking wolf and loves to help. Thunder is especially loyal to the alpha or alphess. He will protect a pack member with his life. He is truly a nice, loyal, and forgiving friend. He hates being mocked though and will protect his alpha with his life. When he is thinking he chews his paw, and when he's angered he bows his head and forgives. He isn't like most wolves, because he is extremely nice.
Arctus (Thunder's father) was raised by humans. He been with the humans since he was a pup. One stormy night the humans died of consumption. Arctus ran away from the place and never returned. He thought he might have a good life being a normal wolf, but he thought wrong. Since he been with humans for a long time, he didn't know how to be a lone wolf. One day he met a pretty arctic wolf named Lea. She showed him how to live without humans. They decided to live together, a pair of lone wolves. As months pass their love grew stronger. They became mates and decided to form a pack of their own. Arctus and Lea were the alpha pair.

Soon Lea gave birth to a litter of pups. 3 girls and 2 boys. Arctus searched for the biggest pup. There he saw Thunder the next generation alpha of the pack. Arctus told Thunder stories of alphas, but Thunder didn't want to be the alpha he wanted to be a warrior. Thunder tried to tell his dad, but he knew if he did his dad would disown him. 7 months passed and Thunder's wish to become warrior grew stronger. One day he told his dad his wish, Arctus growled and snarled. He attacked Thunder and he had to defend himself. The pups watched the brutal fight. At the end Arctus was on the ground, Thunder stared at his dying father, then looked at the terror in everyone's eyes. He didn't know what he had done. The 2 warriors of the pack: Sage and Takeru ran to their dying alpha. The 2 males growled at Thunder. "But... he tried to attack me.." Thunder tried to explain. The 2 males chased him out the pack and permanently banned him from the pack. Thunder spent life as a loner for 1 year. He enjoyed the elements and freedom but stilled had his pack in his heart. He decided to join another pack to reset his life as a pack member. He now pass wolf packs hoping to find his own.


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PostSubject: Re: Thunder- male   Mon Dec 24, 2012 11:45 pm

It's not exactly possible for a wolf's paws to be "as big as a human hand".

Also, your personality needs to be 200 words, and right now it is only 80 words.

The history needs to be at least 300 words, and currently it is only 239.

At this time, there are no alpha positions for him, so you might want to tone down his "leader" personality a little bit or it'll end up getting him in trouble if he joins a pack. Just a warning.
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PostSubject: Re: Thunder- male   Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:59 pm

The personality is still too short. It is 115 words, and it needs to be 200.

Also, which pack were you thinking of putting him in?
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PostSubject: Re: Thunder- male   Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:21 pm

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