Valor- New Wolf

Out of Character Information

Gender:
Female
Date Joined:
11/01/13
RP Characters:
None yet
Who Referred You:
http://alphawolf.gotop100.com

Character Information

Name:
Valor
Age:
5
Gender:
Male
Species:
Black Alaskan wolf (? I don't know if that's acceptable)
Pack:
Kachle
Rank:
Warrior or hunter





Appearance:
Valor has three scars, from a fight with a litter mate,that runs along his chest. One of his paws is white. Also he is very muscular.


Personality:
Valor is very unsettled due to his past. He has been a loner for a while because of his disownment and is very hard. He is used to fighting to survive and wants to show that he is better than his litter mates (mostly his "older" brother) He sees killing as a sport and a habit. Valor has never missed,skipped,or baked down from a chance to fight.
But Valor also has a semi-soft side when it comes to pups, though he tries REALLY hard to hide it, and wolfs that earn his trust. He also has a taste in white wolfs. Valor is not the romantic type, but if someone he cares about, and even if he doesn't, he would fight to the death.


History:
Valor was born to a single loner wolf in a litter of five, two boys and three girls. Though he is strong and big now, he was born the runt. When Valor was a couple mounts old, his bigger brother jumped on him trying to scratch Valors throat but missed, scratching his chest. Valor completely confused on why his brother tried to kill him, he still to this day doesn't know why, ran away. He lived in hate for wolf kind, he still doesn't "like" wolfs.Living like his parents before him,Hen lived as a loner until he came across the Kachle pack. Liking the way they are unpredictable and dangerous, wishes to going.

Here is a list of the acceptable species here on Incendio.
>> https://incendio.rpg-board.net/t228-acceptable-wolf-species-for-incendio <<

Also, your personality and history do not meet the minimum length requirements. Pleased edit them accordingly.

I also noticed a number of grammatical and spelling errors within your personality and history. We are an intermediate role-play site, and we do ask that our members strive to be as literate as possible. For example, within your personality, the word "wolfs" is not actually a word. The proper replacement for this would be the word "wolves" instead.

In your history, a wolf typically does not use their claws to fight, so in reality another wolf would be incredibly unlikely to attack by scratching or clawing. We also understand that it is very common for people to try and say that their wolf was the "runt of the litter", but in reality, a runt would not survive. And they would definitely not grow to be a large adult if they did survive.

There are quite a few of your sentences that are difficult to understand, and I would suggest re-reading through your post out loud to make sure that it sounds correct before moving forward. Here is a link that you might find helpful in fixing up your post,
>> https://incendio.rpg-board.net/t286-a-quick-guide-to-literacy <<

At this time, membership pending.